Pre-production: Script V1

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  1. Hi Dayle - apologies - I did read the email attachment versions a while back, and because the story is actually very 'sleight' - in so much as it's all about performance and reaction etc., I really think you should refine this story idea via animatics + music, as opposed to through any further revisions through writing. This is going to live and die by its lightness of touch and story beats, things which are better apprehended and fed-back on through an actual animatic - as opposed to a more 'intellectual' response to the written word :)

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  2. Thanks for bringing this to my attention. Yeah, no more preppier things, its mostly fluff there to help us with pacing on the visuals. We'll whip out storyboards/ animatic real soon. Can't wait! Watch this space.

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  3. Great! :D Can't wait to move on! Storyboarding straight away will definitely help visualise our animation a lot better.

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  4. WOW! what an exciting blog and idea looking forward to this unfold further other the coming months :)

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  5. Thank you Adam. Fingers crossed :)

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