I tried to stick to the advice you gave me and made sure Kinnaree was within the shot and this time with more establishing shots and a few close ups. Hope it's better now and more linear :)
*Updated version after the feedback*
Hello and welcome to MM studios. We're a CG Arts & Animation duo with a positive attitude and persevering determination.
Here you'll be able to follow the journey as we participate in creating a 3d animation for our self-initiated Project (Minor and Major). This will be based on Thai mythology; the 'Kinnaree'.
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The third stage of the course at the University of the Creative Arts (UCA) in Rochester.